Feed Back for rough cut!

When watching our sequence people left a lot of positive and some negative feedback, here is what people said.

POSITIVE

Good use of black and white.
Music fits in well.
Acting impressive.
Good shot variations.
Good use of close up on eyes.
Titles were good, and effective.
Close up of hand prints are good.
Good Audio.
Not using a tripod gave a good effect.
Was scary!


NEGATIVE

Titles may be too close together.
Can see reflection of camera in Jasmines eyes.
Titles a bit unclear.
Hand prints too even on wall.