FINAL FEEDBACK

These are the questions we asked our audience to respond to.

HOW WAS THE CAMERA WORK?
-varied shots, good point of view shot.
-varied shots although tripod could have been used more smoothly.
- good range of shots.

APPROPRIATE SETTING?
-yes, whiteness of house makes blood stand out
-in some shots setting fits but having such a clean bathroom and it being bright does not make it seem like a thriller.
-yes hand prints on walls are too even, doesnt look like a murder scene.

APPROPRIATE MUSIC?
-yes, in time with Rowena coming out of the bath, gets a bit distorted.
-the music could have fitted better, sound worked well when came out of bath.
- when she came out of bath drums could have carried on or faded out, or repeated at the end.

WHERE THE TITLES CLEAR AND EFFECTIVE?
-yes, not sure about pink at the beginning.
-titles are simple but use good colour.
-titles clear and font could have been used in more of an effective way.

WAS IT A GOOD REPRESENTATION OF A TYPICAL THRILLER SEQUENCE?
-unique because its all black and white except the blood.
-it would be a typical thriller sequence if the location was different.
-yes, too typical in some parts, music at beginning was a little cheesy.

WHAT COULD BE DONE TO IMPROVE THE EDITING?
-titles over last candle scene
-some shots used too long and drag on but otherwise editing was great.
-fast paced editing builds up tension, looks good. Well done.