Action Plan

From the feedback we received we are going to..

- make sure our titles become further apart, and are more clear.
- change the ending so that it creates more tension, runs through lots of scenes really quickly, and is jumpy.
- and just overall make it all tidy and looking good :)

We are also going to add more transitions, fades etc, between the clips.
We are pleased with all the feedback, and it has helped us a lot too see what we need to improve, as we have seen it now from a different perspective, it helped to see other peoples views.

Feed Back for rough cut!

When watching our sequence people left a lot of positive and some negative feedback, here is what people said.

POSITIVE

Good use of black and white.
Music fits in well.
Acting impressive.
Good shot variations.
Good use of close up on eyes.
Titles were good, and effective.
Close up of hand prints are good.
Good Audio.
Not using a tripod gave a good effect.
Was scary!


NEGATIVE

Titles may be too close together.
Can see reflection of camera in Jasmines eyes.
Titles a bit unclear.
Hand prints too even on wall.

Reflection - Rough Cut

This is our rough cut. We are nearly finished, as we used our time wisely, we were the first to film. We have added desaturation to add effect, we have a few fades in and out but this is still a working progress. We also have created and imported in our titles, and made them move around, zoom in and out, and flicker. We have also imported our original soundtrack, and have edited it so that it fits the sequence. In the rest of the time we have, we plan to listen to the feedback we will receive and make a few improvements to certain areas, and develop our video transitions :)

Credit list for thriller Opening sequence

Spiral pictures presents
A NERJ film
Rowena Nathan
Jasmine Firek
Film Editing Parry McPeak
Orignal Music Emma Liddell & Nic
Prouced Josh Rhodes
Directed Ella-Louise Ray
REFLECTION

These are our selcted title names dah dah duhhhh

FILMING - BEHIND THE SCENES!!

we filmed at Rowena's house,
here are some pictures of us filming.

Behind the scenes dun dun duhhh

When filming, we created a bloody and creepy setting. We did this by putting fake blood on Emma's hands, and making bloody hand and making hand prints.