FINAL!!!

OUR FINAL MASTER CUT!

WOOOO!





ENJOY :)

FINAL FEEDBACK

These are the questions we asked our audience to respond to.

HOW WAS THE CAMERA WORK?
-varied shots, good point of view shot.
-varied shots although tripod could have been used more smoothly.
- good range of shots.

APPROPRIATE SETTING?
-yes, whiteness of house makes blood stand out
-in some shots setting fits but having such a clean bathroom and it being bright does not make it seem like a thriller.
-yes hand prints on walls are too even, doesnt look like a murder scene.

APPROPRIATE MUSIC?
-yes, in time with Rowena coming out of the bath, gets a bit distorted.
-the music could have fitted better, sound worked well when came out of bath.
- when she came out of bath drums could have carried on or faded out, or repeated at the end.

WHERE THE TITLES CLEAR AND EFFECTIVE?
-yes, not sure about pink at the beginning.
-titles are simple but use good colour.
-titles clear and font could have been used in more of an effective way.

WAS IT A GOOD REPRESENTATION OF A TYPICAL THRILLER SEQUENCE?
-unique because its all black and white except the blood.
-it would be a typical thriller sequence if the location was different.
-yes, too typical in some parts, music at beginning was a little cheesy.

WHAT COULD BE DONE TO IMPROVE THE EDITING?
-titles over last candle scene
-some shots used too long and drag on but otherwise editing was great.
-fast paced editing builds up tension, looks good. Well done.

FINAL TOUCHES

We are well into the editing of our final sequence.

All we need to do it to add final touches, including taking out any flashes of black.

We had to add more footage back in to make it longer; so to do this we will add in close ups of blood hand prints, and make the titles appear for longer.

We added zooms on hand prints to make the beginning longer and to add more of an abstract theme.

This was all in response to the feedback we recieved when Steve viewed our peice.

We also changed the titles so that they were all the same, and that they all did the same thing. We changed it so that they were all capitals at the beginning of the titles and names etc, and so the 'Producer' and other names so they were bolder then the rest, and stood out more.

There was also a short clip in the film which we wanted to have in reverse, we found out how to do that so we changed it and it looks alot better and fits really well in our sequence.